Crit Lesson.

On the 28th we had a crit lesson where we all showed our title sequence other students commented on what was good and we could do to improve it.

The comment's we received were,
-That we should re-shoot the part of the film when the doctor (Daniel Pye) screams after seeing the ghosts they fought that it wasnt believable by his facial expressions and his scream. Hopfully by re-shooting this it will help to improve our final grade.
- Another comment was that the shots wasnt tight enough so there was a slight jump between shots. We agreed that we are going to edit so that we can cut a second or so off the shots to make them tigther and sharper.
- Another thing that was talked about was the music that we should use, we all agreed in the group and including our teacher that the music we should use should just be a heartbeat or a clock ticking we decided this because we think it will create the effect we wanted towards the audience.
Overall the class and the teacher fought that our title sequence is good, and has good shots, with